When I look back my essay and see the comment by my group’s member I realized there are many things I really need to work hard on my study. I think the only thing i done well as the introduction, and I have to add more specific details and some strong reasons to support my point of view. On the other hand, I face many challenges in this class, the major important thing should be improve my all about English, especially the writing, I think it is the most difficult part for me; it involves the grammar, sentence structure and fluency. In addition, after I took the CAT-W practice, I realized that I used much time on thinking and planning the organization, and I usually have got confusing the main point of the article and easily got hesitate the claim I believe. Those reasons result in I don’t have enough time to finish a complete essay. However, I really need more practice and seriously pay attention on it.
Hi Michelle:
ReplyDeleteBelow you will find my response for this blog series. This is not a grade, nor is it intended to be read as an evaluation of your performance in this class so far. The evaluation of the blog series may be found in Blackboard in the gradebook for this class and the grade is derived from a totally dofferent method as described in the syllabus. What you will see below is a response to your overall writing as of this blog series. The categories are from the CAT-W evaluation rubric (what the evaluator’s use). The comments below are intended to be both descriptive (what I see) and prescriptive (what you need to work on). I will be speaking with you personally about your current strengths and weakness during class. Please feel free to ask as many questions as you like about the following in class, during office hours, or in our FB groups.
Critical Response to Writing Task and Text: you are engaging with the texts and the ideas found there.
Development of Writer’s Ideas: Development needs word as some of the paragraphs are confusing and vague.
Structure of the Response: We will need to work more on argument essay structure.
Sentences, Word Choice, Grammar, Usage, Mechanics: Some minor issues.
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