When I look back again all my works done in this class, I realized there are many improvements I really need to pay attention on my writing. However, I compared between entry 1 to 7 and entry 8 to 11, I find that I have to word hard on the part of development. In my essay, I was aware that the reason always not enough strong to support my claim. Also, the organization of my essay easily make reader get confuse, and the sentences lock of fluency. And addition, the most huge problem should I always used a lot of time to thinking plan how to write an essay of the beginning, and eerier hesitated to choose the argue point. Thus, I don’t have enough time to end up my essay.
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